Dreams, splashed on the tombstone,Life, its only own enemy!
Heart's the twisted rotten branch ,
Soul's the interweaving brook of tears!!
Somehow, I feel that 'Life' is not a good title for this short. Any suggestions are most appreciated.
2 days ago
7 comments:
- Esprit
- Sentience
- Zest
My humble contribution
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the word is 'interweaving', isnt it? or is it 'interviewing' or 'intervening'??
Right you are Mampi; it is interweaving. Will edit that. And Ritu, I like sentience better. I was thinking more like the "Sage's Song"..
Consciousness?
I am not good at poetry :(
By the way, it's really nice to see you back in Blogistan :)
Hi, IHM...I'm glad to be back as well and I appreciate your comments. Not good at poetry? You sure? :)
Although, I have technically been back for about a week. Only got a chance yesterday to do some blogging. A week's vacation means a weeks worth of catching up :)...
hey!!! u back!!! good....
the verse is nice...i would call it the harsh truth.
Hi Priyanka, Thanks!!
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